Tuesday, July 1, 2014

Ole To Myself

I am Ariana


My favorite color is green
I am funny
I am nice
I am a Christian
I am short
I am very outgoing
I am very lazy to do chores
I love pizza
I have very long hair
I am very light skinned
I am on the step team
My best friend is Ana
I am Ariana




3 comments:

  1. Good ode. I like the poem, but please include grouping into stazas. Sometimes It begins to be redundant when we have one big paragraph, but breaking the poem up into stanzas helps the audience to believe the I's (repeating itself) does not matter as much. Good job!

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  2. Sounds very much like you Ariana.

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  3. good poem I liked how u got it to ryme and express you

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